Feedback

Feedback

Leave here a comment how I could have done something better or different, did you like the map or not, did you find any bugs to report and so on. Every feedback helps.

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Koschke

Hi Koschke,
good job for your first Map.
No problems. Well done!

Tip:
if you insert textstrings in english language, you don`t need "Umlaute"

The "Umlaute-function" is for german words within:

"ä", "ö", "ü", "ß", "Ä", "Ö", or "Ü"

Greetings
Flodder

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Take a Nudelholz und hau it on the Kopp of a bekloppt Person .... to give you a better Gefühl than vorher.

Dieser Beitrag wurde von Flodder am 10.06.2013 um 16:18 editiert.

Hi Koschke,
I'm finisched this map with a time : 1:15h .
It was a real fun.


Good Job!

LG José

Really nice first map!

I've did play this map and must say: I'm a little bit fascinated.

It was really cool and i had fun!


But: When the player get the Headquarter , there can you set Enemys 1 or 2 troops.
But all in all a very nice map.

And sorry for my inglisch

Scout

Thank you for feedback!

Flodder
That code indeed isn't needed here, but at first I made this map in finnish which requires ä and ö letters, and I left it there after translation.

Scout
If you mean setting player 1 and 2 hostitle, I think it's fine to be put on firstmapaction, as the player will quite soon know that there is enemy there. I also prefer creating such commands in FMA if possible.


I'm happy to see positive comments, I really wasn't sure about my level as map creator as I have made maps for my personal use only.

I also got code to name the brothers. I will update the map asap.

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Koschke

Ups! Ok!

Many greetings to Finland! My favoured holiday country. I love it!

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Take a Nudelholz und hau it on the Kopp of a bekloppt Person .... to give you a better Gefühl than vorher.

Dieser Beitrag wurde von Flodder am 10.06.2013 um 18:39 editiert.

Another Feedback

Hi Koschke,

I will start with the pros:

- I really like your mapdesign, well done
- it was a great ballance, I mean its not too easy but possible
- nice idea (story)
- first script? not bad...!

I would improve:
- I got the defeat-screen because all the "brothers" died in the fights. It's ok, you can do so but: Please let the player know about that before entering the battle
- nothing else to add here...

Thank you for a good idea: Recently I've seen more and more active english-speaking users here, so I'm gonna upload my next maps in German and English maybe, I hope that will help some players who don't have so much knowledge about our difficult language

Ok, last point:
Here's a little Comfort for changing the names shown in the bottom right hand corner while selecting an entity.
Note: it's not my work, I only used it in a new map...
As I remember it's made by Mordred. Just paste it in your script and change names etc.

Ok, that's the Comfort, and now type that for example in the beginning of your map (FMA):

And here you have to change the names, not in the first part!
Note: the "oldname" is the name you used in the map editor.

Well, if you need some more help/infos here I'll help you as far as I can, just remember that I'm not that skilled here like Flodder, Noigi or Fire_Bird for example. (no problems with advertising? )
If there are still some questions etc. left, feel free to answer and ask whatever you want to.

Thanks for +1 hour fun ingame.
mxm

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Erkläre mir etwas und ich werde es vergessen.
Zeige es mir und ich werde mich erinnern.
Lass es mich selbst machen und ich werde es verstehen.

Hello Mxmln

thank for you feedback, great to hear that you liked the map!
I will definetly try your English versions of your maps for sure. Even though I'm 25% german I cannot speak german almost at all. (Ich spreche nicht Deutsch)

About the losing due brother death: I mentioned about that in the 'important' section of the map description, but I see it may be missed easily. I have now underlined that part of the text.

And thanks for the naming code, I will try it asap!

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Koschke

@Koschke

I'm sorry, I didn't read the whole text, so it was my mistake, I just would advice you to mention something like that in the map too. (For some future maps you may create )

According to the pm, I'm on it and I will send you another message soon.

Greetings

mxm

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Erkläre mir etwas und ich werde es vergessen.
Zeige es mir und ich werde mich erinnern.
Lass es mich selbst machen und ich werde es verstehen.

Hello Koschke

I think, too, that the map was really good! It's a nice start for the story. I'm looking forward to the second part!

Well done!

Nice map, good story, I like it. I haven't finished yet, but want to report something weird about the upgrade of the town-centers:
In my first try, I had the first center upgraded to 125 inhabitants.
Started another game, upgrade was blocked. Found out, this comes, when I first build the university, then the town-center.
Started a third game, town-center as the very first building. Upgrade was possible (but I didn't) and then was blocked later on in the game. Unfortunately I didn't make enough saves to figure out, what blocked the upgrade this time.
Just as a feedback. Everything else works fine.

Hello Wetterhex,

I see your problem. I wanted that you couldn't upgrade both village centres to level 2 so I put code which prevents that. If there is one town centre in the map the game prevents you from upgrading the other one to town centre aswell.

To get such problem you got is only possible if you do not upgrade the village centre near the keep and rush for the another one and upgrade that one. In that case you can only upgrade the other one to city centre and the village centre cannot be upgraded.

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Koschke

Map is 1.1 now

With the help of Mxmln, the brothers now have names. This should make the map easier to play.

If someone knows how to disable you from retiring the brothers, feel free to contact me.

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Koschke

warum ist das Ganze in englisch gehalten? Es gibt immer noch Leute die es nicht verstehn, einschließlich meiner Wenigkeit.
LG

Hello Fhw10,

this map is in English because I cannot write or speak good German enough, I'm sorry for that.

If there is someone who wants to translate this map, feel free to contact me.

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Hallo Fhw10, (I used translator for this one)

Dieses Feld ist in Englisch, weil ich nicht weiß, wie man sprechen oder schreiben gut Deutsch. Ich entschuldige mich dafür.

Wenn hier jemand will, um das Feld der deutschen schalten, kontaktieren Sie mich bitte.

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Koschke

Thats Right

Please Edit to:
Diese Map ist in Englisch,weil ich nicht weiß wie man deutsch schreibt oder spricht.Ich entschuldige mich dafür.
Wenn jemand Zeit und Lust hat die Map ins deutsche zu übersetzen,kann er mich gerne anschreiben.

Thanks Scout, I will put that to the map page.

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Koschke

Hallo Koschke, hier mein Feedback:
Eine schöne Landschaft.
Die Geschichte war schlüssig.
Die Idee mit den "Helden"  hat mir gefallen. Eine andere Art zu spielen. 
Es gab ausreichend  Rohstoffe.  Die Feinde waren leicht. Ich wünschte, ich  könnte diese Karte  länger spielen.
Gut gemacht.

(Übersetzung von iTranslate )


Hallo Koschke, now my feedback :
A beautiful landscape.
The story was coherent.
The idea I liked with the "hero". A different way to play. 
There was enough raw materials. The enemies were easy. I wish I could this card more play.

(Translation by iTranslate )
 

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Si tus vi late, in isse tabernit.